Oh! Also. I hope you continue to be pleased with May. As a rival/companion she is a much fuller and Warmer character (IMO) and while she does go on a bit, she is much more human in this, and it made me so freaking happy.

So do I.  More thoughts undoubtedly to follow, since I’m supposed to be writing a series of character studies on all the rivals at the moment (well, ‘supposed to be,’ I’m actually being lazy and typing up a series of meandering conversations between me and my best friend/editor, but y’know, life).  May/Brendan and Wally are going to come at the end.